FMP - Spencer Murphy Workshop 2 Critical analysis LO3 LO4 LO5 LO6 LO7 / by Chris Chucas

Addressing the exaggerated film look discussed with Spencer Murphy.

( https://www.chrischucas.com/crj2/fmp-spencer-murphy-workshop-1 )

Spencer Murphy and other peers gave me feedback on the look of the images. As i discussed in the post above I think i needed to check in on it and evaluate if I had perhaps gone too far without realising.

Here is the original set below with an example of the process used in the link here .

Original Cardiff Exhibition set

Original Cardiff Exhibition set

I sent of a readjusted set from feedback we chatted about, and I also addressed the process ‘film look’ I sent off this

Old Curve - Chris Chucas.2018

Old Curve - Chris Chucas.2018

Old Process, Chris Chucas.2018

Old Process, Chris Chucas.2018

New Curve.Chris Chucas 2018

New Curve.Chris Chucas 2018

New Process Chris Chucas, 2018

New Process Chris Chucas, 2018

Process adjustment, Chris Chucas.2018

Process adjustment, Chris Chucas.2018

2nd adjustment set for Spencer Murphy. Chris Chucas. 2018

2nd adjustment set for Spencer Murphy. Chris Chucas. 2018

Spencer gave some feedback and said that it’s going in the right direction with the process but the set could use a little work. We talked about it a bit and he suggested thinking about why I entered the smiling ones and we agreed it was a little distracting to the overal themes I was trying to get over, it’s something that could work in a book where there’s more room. I got back to work and made some digital ‘working prints to live with’ whilst I organised some ideas. I’m feeling really excited about the potential to make this reach its maximum potential, I feel really lucky to have feedback like this.